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It sounds better, although I found the tambourine to be far too strong. I'd suggest putting the tambourine layer away from the foreground. The vocal is also far too underwhelming. Perhaps if you double track it it'd sound more full and loud.
I also feel the end acoustic plucking to be a tad bit "out of the blue". I'd suggest replacing the acoustic guitar with the piano playing the same notation on two different octaves.
Overall I think this composition is headed in the right track. Just needs a bit more work.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the suggestions, I agree with both the tambourine and vox problems and will fix them!
for the acoustic guitar, I thank you for the suggestion, but I'm satisfied with the (sp?) of it so i'll probably incorporate acoustic guitar in the rest of the song
thanks piss!
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Solid beat throughout this Hip Hop - Modern song, the only thing I did not enjoy was the "you are now listening to a Sinister production" the first time it was okay, then it just got redundant.
Author's Response:
I know, but I have to tag them now, to help prevent theft. Using it in a flash or whatever is one thing, but downloading it and claiming you made it is another.
I'll try to make it less prominent in the future.
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It reminds me of something who's down in the bricks, but slowly works his way up to success or true happiness.
I adored the piano in this, sound very classic and uplifting, yet not clean, and I love unclean. The guitar solo at the end was positively awesome - a great finale to a slow-progressing song such as this.
This song is reminiscent to some sort of 60's-70's type of tune. Good job.
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This entry showsmuch potential for future projects. It's simply bliss.
I see a possible future between you, I and Phobotech. With our talents we can surely take the world.
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I don't think Newgrounds could contain the awesome of such an act.
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I love the erratic keyboard in this one, I enjoy yip/jumpish type of music like this.
I would love to hear this as a full song/piece, a little less noise or volume and I'd adore it.
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Why thank you! =)
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As said, this is a pretty good piece. But it'll never amount to my work. Sorry.
Until next time.
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It seems that your music is beginning to transform into something very dark, very disturbing, yet still holding the qualities of innocence and naivety.
There's something evil... I cannot put my finger on it...
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penis
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You sir are indeed very creative! I was completely blown away by the sheer magnificence of this piece. You took something simple and innocent and transformed it into something amazingly beautiful.
Until next time.
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This song has something that most humans can relate to: the unconditional love of bacon. The reason why I think this is a tune with great potential, is because it has a recognizeable rhythm with very catchy and easy to remember lyrics.
Until next time.
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This one particular audioclip reminded me of when me and my friends would gather around and just chat and have fun. Those were good times. The low quality adds a certain charm that just gets to me, you know?
Until next time.
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